Towards Lyrical Satirical Poetry

Lesson for the day.

Several rhyme patterns can be a sonnet. Here’s 3 quatrains and a couplet, Shakespearean. Emma used a Spenserian pattern, couplet between quatrains.

Ode to the Gold
A Sonnet by Eighthaero

My lovely gold, you now inspire me write
Of how I love the way you hide then glow,
Invading all my mind both day and night,
With dreams of just how much my worth will grow.

Should I compare thee to a summer’s day?
You’re my true fancy, pure in value money.
Bright sun heats up the month of May
Just as we bid adieu the Easter Bunny.

How do I love you? Let me tell the way
I love your precious color, shine and gleam.
Thoughts of your brilliant shine fills all my day
And ends with slumber in a lovely dream.

As now I must go toil with useful heart,
Hold fast my loving words whilst we’re apart

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Re: VAT emptied
Post by 8thaero » Wed Jun 27, 2018 2:28 pm

We vats to please but jus vants to be alone! Tired, poor? Just looking to see how that will translate on them ‘hubbled masses yearning to speak free’! Luv it when a plan comes together. 8

n CA in late 40s post war thick std English Comp text was a giant ($$$) tome, “Readings for a Liberal Education”. 2 Semesters long IF you passed the ‘Subject A’ exam or took 1st Bonehead English semester for no credit. Was what should be taught in Hi School. Some later was rethot and named “Readings TOWARDS a LIberal Education”. since you either got it or didn’t up to the student. 1st class Fall Semester that was explained by my prof a new UC grad, Ben Luchow . I chose to do the essays by rewrite some classics such as “Upon Julia’s Clothes”. R Herrick 1591-1674.

https://interestingliterature.com/2017/ … s-clothes/

“In bobby sox my Jullie goes. Then, when through holes, I see her toes… Her Jeans and T-shirt I oppose .”

I explained to Ben, nice bright Jewish fellow, my year’s project will be “TOWARDS Lyrical, Satirical Poetry” & he lapped it up. Carried it on throughout a now long life. Blog stuff. 8

“© Don I Phillips (8th Aero DBA), http://8thaero.com/, Go 4 Gold, 2016.
Simple fact is into it there no escape for now 62 years. Any paper scrap can take a scribble. Never my real business some stuff’d get quoted local and national. Sisters Ann Landers and Abby Van Buren, WPO’s Bill Safire were occasional fans as my old fiend Heloise (the younger) here in SAT still at her work. Express News here had a “Puro San Antonio” contest a long while back. Winner?

Pure is not selective numbers
Pure is not the driven snow.
Pure is mutual, all inclusive.
Puro San Antonio.
Pure is fun along a river.
Peace within the Alamo.
Cascarones at fiesta.
Puro San Antonio.

Printed on my checks ever since. Due some nice prizes. like a pvt dinner cruise. free rooms in town, never got a one. All seem to just forget they donated them. “Oh that lady left awhile back.” Least Puro term still used in publicity. 8

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